so today as we always do free writing we 20 minutes as you already know so yeah here is mine
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We should have a homeless shelter for homeless people, because they are just walking around town asking for money to buy a pie or something. They can have food and drinks to eat instead of asking for money, and they maybe can have a better life get a job and by them there own house to stay at, and have money to by them food and stuff. Homeless people can have a warm place to stay if our community had a homeless shelter for them to stay and be warm. Homeless people have cars to sleep in and they ask for maybe 2 or 3 dollars and people be mean and don't give them anything and they probably stave. Down town there are people busking for money and that is not good because how would you like it if you were homeless and is that desperate they you busk for money
This is definitely a big problem and more homeless shelters would be a great thing to have in every community. Maybe try to do a little research to add facts to your writing. What are the effects of homelessness? How have homeless shelters helped in other areas etc.
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