FREE WRITING / SCRUBBER DIVER
this each week we write about a topic or what ever you want to write about for 20 minutes here is mine I am writing a little story about scrubber diving because I love scrubber diving here it is
!! HOPE YOU ENJOY !!
!!Scrubber diver!!
I'm moving gently forward, over the wild and beautiful unexplored world below me, I am floating in silents I'm breaking it up with the sound of my breath. Above me There's nothing but shimmering light the place where I've come from and will go back to when I am done, here I am diving I'm a scrubber diver I'm going deeper past the wrinkled rocks and dark seaweed towards the deep blueness where a school of silver fish wait, as I swim through the water bubbles burst from me, wobbling like little jellyfish they rise, I check my air I don't have enough time to see everything but that is what makes it so special.
I love this piece of writing! It reminds me of a recent SCUBA dive I went on at Taupiri. It is certainly an amazing feeling being underwater. I love the variety of descriptive language in here, it really paints a picture in my mind. In this piece, the only advise I can give is to use the 'define word' tool to help you identify if the words you have chosen are correct - e.g. silents or silence. Scrubber or SCUBA.
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