Monday, 12 August 2019
My weekend
On Sunday me and my little nephew went outside to play what ever we could play, we played Golf, Tennis, Ping Pong even the trampoline but it was still boring besides ping pong and tennis. we went inside my sister was watching Netflix and my cousin as well. We didn't want to watch Netflix because they were watching dumb stuff so we played with the kinetic sand, that was boring because I couldn't find mine !!BANG!! AAAHHHH I jumped but the door just slammed shut it was windy really windy, LIGHT BULB I said out loud the kite it would fly nice and high in the wind so we went out side flew the kite it went High and high but the dumb thing is we had to wind the string in. We playing golf on the trampoline and all that then when it rained we went back inside to watch Netflix.
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It sounds like you had a super busy Sunday, it is a shame you couldn't find the fun in all the activities you participated in. It was definitely a perfect day for kite flying, maybe next time you could think about adding some descriptive language to describe some things. How could you describe your boredom, rather than saying 'I'm bored'? How could you describe the kite in the wind etc.
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