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Tuesday, 11 June 2019

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Through The Light Comes Darkness

Why should people go to war? People go to war because some want to and some people don’t want to.
Young people lie about their age and people don't want to go to war. Why should people get punished because they
didn’t want to go to war? Why do they get sentenced to death? That is sad! When people turn 16 they have to got to
war and fight, but some didn’t want to. People in the war shouldn’t be dying for no reason, they are losing their lives for no reason. They are now dead because Hitler started these wars because he was greedy

Image result for warI am adamant that 16 year old people shouldn’t be forced to go and fight in the war.
Some people probably have no experience in fighting but they still have to go, they still have a whole life ahead of
them. Young people pass because they are forced to join the war. Why didn’t Hitler go to war? He was the one who
started these wars and innocent teenagers died because of him. He is a greedy person who needed to be punished
. Victor James Gallie And Oscar Eugene Gallie both had pride and fought for our people,They served in war and died
with pride. Victor James Gallie died from wounds in WW1, he managed to go home and but died from his wounds.
Oscar Eugene died in WW2. They both fought with pride and died with honor. They were brothers.

Image result for warI firmly agree that people shouldn’t need to go to war if they didn’t want to. They shouldn’t have been fighting because
Hitler wants a war. They have fought for months. People at the age of 16 didn’t want to go to war but some did,
some other people lie about their age and they go to war, that is a bad choice. Nasty people make people fight for
what they think is right. They get people 16 years and older to fight in war, some people are scared, they run away and
then they get caught and die. Some people want to go to war, and some people don’t.


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I dynamically agree that people shouldn’t be dying at war it’s not their war to fight!. People are saying no when
people come and get them for war. When you say no you go to jail, but if you go to war then run away you get
sentenced to death. Why do people do this? The main reason why people have been dying for no reason is because
of Hitler. He is the main reason why people have been dying. If he wanted war why couldn’t he fight and not let other
people fight. He should have went to war and he should have been the one who died not innocent people!


Why do people get forced to go to war and fight? I think fighting is bad and it brings no joy and hope to this world,
it just brings us bad memories, bad dreams and death. War should have never been agreed to and shouldn’t even
exist. This brings nothing to the world and it kills like a virus. This shouldn’t have happened because when people
survive from war they come home having scary dreams, they change, they suffer because of what they have seen
and done. They didn’t want that to
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Written By Satyn-Pearl

2 comments:

  1. Hey Saytn, I’m Izaiah from Paihia School in Te Ngahere. I really enjoyed reading your argument about why people shouldn’t go to war, especially people at such a young age. Your argument is very powerful because of the type of vocabulary you use and the structure of your writing. You also have a lot of information around the war and the consequences of going to war. Maybe you could also think it this way, problems occur between different country for whatever reason. If the problem breaks out and is known throughout the public a war could be fought. These people lie about their age because they either want to get out of the house or because they’re not scared to die and want to fight for their country. Your blog post is very thoughtful and good. Thank you for posting. See ya later.

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  2. Hi, thanks for commenting on my work and thanks for the heads up.
    BYEEEEE

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