HI my name is Satyn-pearl, i go to kawakawa school and we did cross country and it was fun, I liked that I came first and that I just had an amazing day, I thought it was gonna be boring but it was not boring than last year.
Hi Satyn Its Miria from kawakawa primary I like how you talked about your cross country day it looks very fun and interesting but I think you should work more on more writing and I hope you have a nice day bye.
Hi Satyn its Roxy here i like how you said you enjoyed your day I also enjoyed my day at cross country that was so cool to see you come first. Your pictures looked like you were in it to win it. Well done keep up the great work.
Hi Satyn Its Miria from kawakawa primary I like how you talked about your cross country day it looks very fun and interesting but I think you should work more on more writing and I hope you have a nice day bye.
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DeleteTHANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK MIRIA
DeleteHi Satyn its Roxy here i like how you said you enjoyed your day I also enjoyed my day at cross country that was so cool to see you come first. Your pictures looked like you were in it to win it. Well done keep up the great work.
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