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Showing posts with label free writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label free writing. Show all posts

Monday, 1 April 2019

war


as usual we always do 20 minutes of writing of anything we want here is mine
!! HOPE YOU ENJOY !!


It was my first day of war I didn’t know when it was starting I was hesitating I walked outside and a
gush of wind flew past me, I knew they were coming. I took cover the first bullet shots were fired,
!!BANG, BANG!! war has begun. I took my first shots they threw a blind bomb and my life flashed
before my eyes I couldn’t see anything all I could see were blurs of things lucky I wasn’t close to the bomb.
My friend got hurt I dropped to my knees and helped my friend I took him to cover, my eyes felt like sand were
in them, a lot of sand. They stung really badly. . . I ran back to help fight, there I smelt fire and I knew it was
close I walked and walked, the tents were all on fire as I was walking a hand grabbed my leg and pulled me down
I was scared, but I knew I had to stay strong I am a solder. I am fighting for my people so I knew what I had to do.
I got my gun out I shot it before he could take his shot, but it was empty my gun needed more bullets.
As he nearly shot me my friend shot him I was saved and I was glad that i was saved. . . 39 days later war had
stopped I was glad that war has stopped because I had a whole life forward that I needed I didn’t want to die I
was only 25, we traveled back home I was so happy and excited. As i got home I was happy,
home sweet home, have a great time Satyn “my friend said” my family and I celebrated a party. . . .  
!! TO BE CONTINUED!!

Monday, 25 March 2019

FREE WRITING / SCRUBBER DIVER


this each week we write about a topic or what ever you want to write about for 20 minutes here is mine I am writing a little story about scrubber diving because I love scrubber diving here it is

!! HOPE YOU ENJOY !!


!!Scrubber diver!!


I'm moving gently forward, over the wild and beautiful unexplored world below me, I am floating in silents I'm breaking it up with the sound of my breath. Above me There's nothing but shimmering light the place where I've come from and will go back to when I am done, here I am diving I'm a scrubber diver I'm going deeper past the wrinkled rocks and dark seaweed towards the deep blueness where a school of silver fish wait, as I swim through the water bubbles burst from me, wobbling like little jellyfish they rise, I check my air I don't have enough time to see everything but that is what makes it so special.


Monday, 4 March 2019

unknown women

we all do free writing on Monday for 20 minutes and we can write about anything we want and this is what I chose !HOPE YOU ENJOY.!



she is standing straight
she is letting her hands lie on her dress
she is standing at the bottom of her stair case
she is a wealthy women
she is getting married
she is a hard worker
she is wearing a long white dress down to the floor
she is wearing her hair pushed back into a bun
she probably comes form a wealthy family
she probably doesn´t want to get married
she probably has to marry this man that got chosen for her

Monday, 25 February 2019

poem


On Monday morning we do 20 minutes of free writing about what we choose we can choose anything here is my free writing
!!HOPE YOU ENJOY!!



I slowly peep threw the crack in the wall
and you cant imagine what i saw
from behind me I felt a bump
and I crashed on to floor
I slowly pulled myself up holding onto my bed & then
I went face first and hit my head
once again I pulled myself up and in front of me stood a lady
but not any lady she was small but tall she was the size of my index finger
I ask what she does and she said I just linger
I was confused and when I looked behind her I see a small cottage in my wall
but I don know why I had that fall
then I realized when I pinched myself  it was a dream when I woke up my mum was pushing me trying to wake me for school
what a deep sleep you were in dear
Mum you can imagine what I saw
and when I turned to get up there
was a hole in my wall